I did not like this content because:
* The article lacks structure and clarity. The beginning is engaging, but it’s hard to follow due to the lack of section breaks and transitions between sentences.
* The language used is formal, but in a way that feels rigid and lacks warmth. As a result, the content doesn’t feel relatable or engaging for an international audience.
* The length of the article is confusing. It’s too short to provide a comprehensive view of the story, yet it’s too long and feels like a collection of random sentences.
* There are no clear headings or sections, making it difficult for readers to navigate the article and find the information they’re looking for.
* The inclusion of the Cricket Rocket advertisement at the bottom of the article feels spammy and disrupts the reading experience.
* Overall, the article feels disjointed and lacks a cohesive tone, making it a difficult read.
To turn this content into a well-structured and engaging article, I would:
1. Break the article into clear sections with headings and subheadings to organize the content and make it easier to follow.
2. Use a more conversational tone that is approachable and relatable for an international audience.
3. Ensure the language used is clear and concise, avoiding jargon and overly technical terms.
4. Use transitions between paragraphs to create a smooth flow of ideas and maintain the reader’s attention.
5. Review the article’s structure and length to ensure it is concise and provides all the necessary information without being overwhelming.
6. Edit the article to remove the advertisement and ensure the remaining content is free of irrelevant or distracting elements.
7. Review the article from the perspective of an international reader to ensure it meets the needs and expectations of a diverse audience.
